ypip 23

July 2nd, 2009, 12:55 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply catqueen13, July 2nd, 2009, 1:03 pm

I like how Arty turned out in the last panel. ^^ (sorry for not updating in a long time)

AAID: You know he does! ~u~

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User's Comments:

Reply animeangelindark, July 2nd, 2009, 2:45 pm

lol, yeeeey! he looks so bootifulll!

Reply snaggeroutlaw, November 25th, 2009, 11:04 pm

Critique Your comic needs a ridiculous amount of work.

1. kawaii boiluv isn't going to distract us from the fact you have no plot and just crudely drawn molestation between the two characters. You have no goal for your characters to work towards other than that one guy groping the other guy's ass LOL KAWAII DESU NE. Develop a plot.

2. The artwork needs a lot of work. Your anatomy reminds me of my spaghetti dinner. Looking up tutorials is a wonderful thing; Deviantart is a decent place to start looking. Your pencil lines also look sloppy and unfinished Inking on a program like Photoshop or GIMP will make your comic look so much more better.

3. Color! And other than the eyes and the marking on that one guy's neck. And a background would be great. I have no idea where your characters are.

This seems to be a running theme in your comics, so fix up these things and you should have a good comic going.

And for the love of Christ, REMOVE THE MUSIC. I jumped a foot out of my chair when I went onto your page!

Reply Mitani, November 29th, 2009, 2:45 pm

Jeesh snaggeroutlaw do you have to be on the attack with critiques...
There is something called 'constructive criticism', look it up.

I know you mean the best but saying it nicer is the way to go if you want people to listen to you and take you seriously...

And to be honest on the note on colour I do actually like how theres the occasional thing coloured (i mean its better than none at all).
And musics fine if it can pause...which I cannot so I had to mute lol.

Reply catqueen13, November 29th, 2009, 6:45 pm

Okay... thank you for your "constructive" crit. I will put backgrounds in future pages. I removed the music thing (because in all honesty, it made me jump too). But I don't have a plot because this is EPISODIC. Kind of like Courage the Cowardly Dog, or Johnny Bravo. I'm sure you remember those cartoons. Those are not pencil. Those are pencilled, then inked. I can't ink using my cpu because, I am left handed and I have a right handed tablet. It makes it extremely difficult. Hope that helps. I'm not hiding this comic any more, and will continue it in December. Have a nice life. ^_^

Reply Savontablet (Guest), November 30th, 2009, 6:46 am

It might help if you reconfigure your tablet since most have no hand settings.

They are a surface to draw on like any other. Think of reconfiguring a mouse and using it on the other side of the keyboard.

Reply catqueen13, November 30th, 2009, 8:51 am

I can't. See, it has this thing on the left side that makes it zoom in on the picture, and every time my hand even touches it, it zooms in 200% more! It's very annoying.

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